BEWARE THOSE GIRLS BORN WITH A SILVER SPOON IN THEIR MOUTHS The EXPERIMENT ONEIn The Beginningby DrkFetyshNyghtsImprint: Fetish World Books 
 
BDSM classed as Non-consensual.
Contains strong BDSM content. | No. words: 33956 Ebook Price: $5.95 
 - Average 3.2 from 5 ratings
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This book is about what absolute power can do. A young girl and her
family become "experiments" in the hands of an organisation of super
sadists fronted by Sarka.
DFN (the author)is very skilled at taking us along on a journey which
only goes down for the victims...it makes you question what you feel
as you witness how individuals are stripped of their humanity and how
the light is slowly extinguished in their soul. We get a good insight
at the planning and working of the super sadist commander in chief.
DFN's style of writing is direct and she has found a good balance
between the descriptions of the deviant sexual acts and the
descriptions of what goes on in her character's mind.
She gives us food to hate one of the "victims" and food to admire the
main dominant character.
Don't read this book if you are looking for romance, compromise, mercy
and reassurance that the good ones always get out in the end!
Read it if you want to explore what extreme sm would be about, what
total dedication to sadism would look like and what having one's own
delicate and enjoyable life methodically destroyed would feel like.
This is a very enjoyable foundation for the second installement.
Proofreading needs to be tightened. 5 out of 5 (Dressage10)
This "author's" work was bad enough when the extent of her sins
against literature were that she wrote in sentence fragments rather
than complete sentences, and began at least one in three of those
fragments with the word "Like" which, if she had just refrained, would
have turned at least 15% of her sentence fragments back into real
sentences. But this? THIS is not a story; it is a 175-page story
FRAGMENT in which nothing even mildly interesting happens in the first
100 pages, and which includes a grand total of ONE (count it: ONE)
rather pedestrian manual sex/forced orgasm scene to which the victim
reacts in the "author's" usual overblown and completely unrealistic
manner.
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Fair warning: I MAY continue to purchase drkfetyshnyght's ridiculous
trash, but if I do so it will be with the specific intention of
warning as many readers as possible of the ways in which she is
cheating them, for as long as she continues to do so. 1 out of 5
(death2uall)
like most people I remember how good the early "books" were and how
bad the latest are, the repetitive repetitions are repeatedly
repeated,(for example) cut them out and you arent left with many
pages, not that you get many to start with, what is barely a book is
always sold in 2 or 3 parts to increase income, and dashed out without
thought to an actually story,
give her work a miss till she starts thinking about her readers the
people who are actually paying for this and not her bank account 1
out of 5 (neveragain)
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| | STORY DESCRIPTION The group's requirements were simple. They needed a well bred privileged teenage girl. One born with a silver spoon in her mouth. A girl who had wanted for nothing, and had been given everything. One who had everything to lose ??" everything that could be taken from her. When they sourced and located Tessa, only offspring of the Lord and Lady Clarissa Ayelsbury, they proceeded to take her out of circulation in the cruelest of ways. And what they did to her was even more cruel. Striking with daring and impunity at the heart of the establishment, this group of out and out fetish sadists led by a breathtaking south African woman by the name of Sarka not only change the very essence of Tessa, but they also take her mother to the edge. And Lord Ayelsbury won't be any bother because he harbours secrets that he wouldn't want to get out. He will be a good boy, or else. | Keywords related to this title - click on a keyword to find more, related stories Lesbian Bi BDSM fetish latex leather Submission domination orgasm
denial Author information: "DrkFetyshNyghts writes her hard hitting stories almost as crime novels. The BDSM, the Fetish and the Bondage being the crimes along with the impunity with which the perpetrators operate. This, together with an autobiographical feel and forensic attention to detail, adds a distinctly jagged and disturbing edge to the narrative." Reviews This book is about what absolute power can do. A young girl and her family become "experiments" in the hands of an organisation of super sadists fronted by Sarka.
DFN (the author)is very skilled at taking us along on a journey which only goes down for the victims...it makes you question what you feel as you witness how individuals are stripped of their humanity and how the light is slowly extinguished in their soul. We get a good insight at the planning and working of the super sadist commander in chief.
DFN's style of writing is direct and she has found a good balance between the descriptions of the deviant sexual acts and the descriptions of what goes on in her character's mind.
She gives us food to hate one of the "victims" and food to admire the main dominant character.
Don't read this book if you are looking for romance, compromise, mercy and reassurance that the good ones always get out in the end!
Read it if you want to explore what extreme sm would be about, what total dedication to sadism would look like and what having one's own delicate and enjoyable life methodically destroyed would feel like.
This is a very enjoyable foundation for the second installement.
Proofreading needs to be tightened. 5 out of 5 (Dressage10) This "author's" work was bad enough when the extent of her sins against literature were that she wrote in sentence fragments rather than complete sentences, and began at least one in three of those fragments with the word "Like" which, if she had just refrained, would have turned at least 15% of her sentence fragments back into real sentences. But this? THIS is not a story; it is a 175-page story FRAGMENT in which nothing even mildly interesting happens in the first 100 pages, and which includes a grand total of ONE (count it: ONE) rather pedestrian manual sex/forced orgasm scene to which the victim reacts in the "author's" usual overblown and completely unrealistic manner.
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Fair warning: I MAY continue to purchase drkfetyshnyght's ridiculous trash, but if I do so it will be with the specific intention of warning as many readers as possible of the ways in which she is cheating them, for as long as she continues to do so. 1 out of 5 (death2uall) Author reply: With uttmost respect, I think perhaps this is a case of 'my kink is not your kink'. Your criticisms are subjective and as repetitive as some of my passages of writing (mine are that way by design). You know, if I were you, I wouldn't continue to purchase my titles. I honestly don't need your money and your criticism maybe says more about you than it says about me. Plus I think the positive reviews outweigh the negative. Certainly the good outweigh the out and out insults which you seem to get off on. So sad! Please tell me you are not another author sticking the boot into the competition? BDSM, fetish and kink fiction, by its very nature needs to be a little rediculous, and 'criminal' in order to be 'got'. You, again with respect don't get it, at all. But, rest assured I do read all feedback and draw conclusions from them. Largely I keep these conclusions to myself :) like most people I remember how good the early "books" were and how bad the latest are, the repetitive repetitions are repeatedly repeated,(for example) cut them out and you arent left with many pages, not that you get many to start with, what is barely a book is always sold in 2 or 3 parts to increase income, and dashed out without thought to an actually story,
give her work a miss till she starts thinking about her readers the people who are actually paying for this and not her bank account 1 out of 5 (neveragain) |
